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kelly  |  20 August 2008 - 4:16am

I'm strolling through the mall, gazing into the shops as I pass, the heels of my shoes clicking on the shiny floor tiles. I walk past an old man sitting alone at a table. A shaft of sunlight shines down from a window above, bathing him in brightness. It's as if he's sitting onstage in a spotlight, his shock of hair gleaming white. I give him a sideways glance as I pass. He looks up at me, but I avert my eyes. And then immediately I wonder why I avoided his gaze. He looks kind, and a bit lonely. Or maybe just bored.

I soon head back the way I came, and I decide that if the man is still sitting there, I will smile. Just to acknowledge him. After all, he is not anonymous, not an archetype, not The Old Man in a play. He is a person with a soul.

I soon see that he is still sitting at the table, still in the spotlight. He is looking down, his nose buried in a handkerchief. I doubt he will even look up, but when I walk by he raises his eyes to meet mine.

I smile, and he responds with a wink.

His timing is so impeccable, it seems we'd rehearsed it. As I walk on, my smile widens, and I suspect this exchange brightened my day even more than it did his.

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William  |  20 August 2008 - 8:06am

And as you walked by he thought to himself "Whoa. Who cut her hair?"

 

RzDrms  |  20 August 2008 - 9:47am

this post made my toes tingle. and your awesome alliteration made me swoon.

 

UCM  |  20 August 2008 - 11:20am

I go out of my way to smile at people who look like they need a smile, especially those who are handicapped. The other day I smiled at a girl being wheeled around in a wheelchair while shopping. There was no expression on her face when I first saw her, just a glazed look. After I smiled, she smiled back in the most unforgettable open mouthed joyous way. Why do people go out of their way to ignore others when moments like these lift us up?

 

nadia  |  20 August 2008 - 6:00pm

That's beautiful.

 

jane  |  20 August 2008 - 7:02pm

Love the post.

When my eyes meet a stranger's eyes I sometimes try to cheekily give them a spontaneous smile, just to see what kind of reaction I can elicit from them. Some smile back sincerely, some smile back by moving the lips and not the heart, some smile but with a laughable gawk at the same time, and I suspect some avert their eyes then dart glances my way again, perhaps wishing they had rehearsed a better reaction!

 

von Krankipantzen  |  21 August 2008 - 12:17am

Ah, you're just a big flirt! In the best possible way.

 

Chrissycat  |  21 August 2008 - 1:26pm

William -
Oh such a quick wit.
VERY AMUSING!

 

Cat  |  22 August 2008 - 9:22am

Oh, TOTAL perv. No doubt about it.
Also? With the writing? Well done.
;)

 

Kerri Anne  |  25 August 2008 - 1:50pm

So awesome, this.

 
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