bright spot
kelly | 20 August 2008 - 3:16am
I'm strolling through the mall, gazing into the shops as I pass, the heels of my shoes clicking on the shiny floor tiles. I walk past an old man sitting alone at a table. A shaft of sunlight shines down from a window above, bathing him in brightness. It's as if he's sitting onstage in a spotlight, his shock of hair gleaming white. I give him a sideways glance as I pass. He looks up at me, but I avert my eyes. And then immediately I wonder why I avoided his gaze. He looks kind, and a bit lonely. Or maybe just bored.
I soon head back the way I came, and I decide that if the man is still sitting there, I will smile. Just to acknowledge him. After all, he is not anonymous, not an archetype, not The Old Man in a play. He is a person with a soul.
I soon see that he is still sitting at the table, still in the spotlight. He is looking down, his nose buried in a handkerchief. I doubt he will even look up, but when I walk by he raises his eyes to meet mine.
I smile, and he responds with a wink.
His timing is so impeccable, it seems we'd rehearsed it. As I walk on, my smile widens, and I suspect this exchange brightened my day even more than it did his.
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And as you walked by he thought to himself "Whoa. Who cut her hair?"
this post made my toes tingle. and your awesome alliteration made me swoon.
I go out of my way to smile at people who look like they need a smile, especially those who are handicapped. The other day I smiled at a girl being wheeled around in a wheelchair while shopping. There was no expression on her face when I first saw her, just a glazed look. After I smiled, she smiled back in the most unforgettable open mouthed joyous way. Why do people go out of their way to ignore others when moments like these lift us up?
That's beautiful.
Love the post.
When my eyes meet a stranger's eyes I sometimes try to cheekily give them a spontaneous smile, just to see what kind of reaction I can elicit from them. Some smile back sincerely, some smile back by moving the lips and not the heart, some smile but with a laughable gawk at the same time, and I suspect some avert their eyes then dart glances my way again, perhaps wishing they had rehearsed a better reaction!
Ah, you're just a big flirt! In the best possible way.
William -
Oh such a quick wit.
VERY AMUSING!
Oh, TOTAL perv. No doubt about it.
Also? With the writing? Well done.
;)
So awesome, this.